Jack was very very hunger, so he sold family cow for sale. And, he was given five dried beans. I thought he was brave, because it is family cow. His mother was very angry. But next day, when he woke up, his room was still dark. “Strange…” He thought, and went to the window. A thick curtain of leaves blocked out the sun. It was amazing!! I was surprised at climbing his beanstalk. At last, Jack’s hair brushed a soft, fluffy cloud. There was a castle above the clouds. In the castle, He met many people who are a woman, a giant, a fairy. And he was given a chicken which can birth gold eggs. That way, he became to be a rich man. I envy him!!
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Saki,
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